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Thx for the chapter. If I was Kevin ( which I’m clearly now so it makes sense that he would not do what I would have done in his shoes) and I found out about the true bonding ritual I would have killed myself. Because that would show me that I’m not free and I have no choice in anything in my life and all my actions are dictated by some higher being like some kinda of puppet and that’s not a life worth living. (Don’t wanna sound like I’m hating on the author for this I’m not and totally fine with it keep up the great work👌👌👌)
I know and I totally agree I just think you made him too strong too fast. It would have felt better if you had described the training process shown how he had failed and grown from it. I don’t wanna sound like I’m hating on the story cause I’m not but I feel like his path to being OP was just to quick
It had good potential and I think the author can do some really good story’s but it has a huge flaw. It’s boring the MC got Op to fast to the point that it’s boring as we know the MC will always win without trouble. I’m not trying to hate on the author I think they could do really well and write a great story but they just made the MC too strong. My recommendation is to give the MC only one of the powered he had and make him work for them not instantly be super strong. I hope you fix the story up as it has a lot of potential and could be really good.
It’s cause her family manipulated Axel so that now THE MAGICAL RUSSIAN MAFIA wants to kill him. Also it makes no sense that Axel would be ok with this as seen in the early chapters he HATES being manipulated so why is he suddenly ok with it???