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  • Mauro_Ceita_4145
    Mauro_Ceita_414511mth
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    Thanks for the chapter.. the story had a great start that can make anyone intrigued bout what is going to happen next. keep the good work and I'll be waiting for the following chapters author-kun.

    Ch 1 Reborn
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    One Piece: Chimera
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  • Mauro_Ceita_4145
    Mauro_Ceita_41451yr
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    Thanks for the chapter... The story is interesting and had a good start so I'll be waiting for the following chapters..

    Ch 1 A new Poseidon
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    Fate/Poseidon
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  • Mauro_Ceita_4145
    Mauro_Ceita_41451yr
    Replied to TrueMonarch00

    No, why would you want to see that in the story, and first of all anyone can see very clearly that with MC way of doing things and thoughts he wouldn't follow others or even submit to anyone.. And what would be the fun in seeing that happening in the story..?

    Ch 23 Chapter 23: Whitebeard Pirates
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    One Piece: Godly Fruit
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  • Mauro_Ceita_4145
    Mauro_Ceita_41451yr
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    Thanks for the chapter.. The story is good and can caught the attention of anyone that likes OP MC's or Marvel and DC Universes.. The only thing that you have to do from now on is trying to make the characters look more real in the way they speaking (like showing more feelings)..

    Ch 2 Something ends, something begins
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    Doctor Fate in Marvel
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  • Mauro_Ceita_4145
    Mauro_Ceita_41451yr
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter.. Keep going with the good work..

    Ch 37 Spirit Empire
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    Travelling through the heavens
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  • Mauro_Ceita_4145
    Mauro_Ceita_41451yr
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter.. The story had a really great start and I see a lot of potential in it so I'll definitely will be waiting for the following chapters author-kun..

    Ch 2 Chapter 1 ( Elite Camp )
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    One Piece: The Template System [ ON HOLD ]
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  • Mauro_Ceita_4145
    Mauro_Ceita_41451yr
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter... Waiting for the following ones author-kun..

    Ch 1 1 Chapter Where is this place?
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    Reincarnated as Madara in Douluo Dalu
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  • Mauro_Ceita_4145
    Mauro_Ceita_41451yr
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter. The story has a lot of potential, so I'll be waiting for the following chapters author-kun..

    Ch 1 Chapter One: Why? Because he's Bullet!
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    bkkl
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  • Mauro_Ceita_4145
    Mauro_Ceita_41451yr
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter... The story had a good start point, I'll be waiting for the next chapters.

    Ch 1 Chapter 1 - Up we go
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    One Piece: The Strawhats Gunslinger
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  • Mauro_Ceita_4145
    Mauro_Ceita_41451yr
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    Thanks for the chapter. But to be honest with you. with all his power and a system with unlimited points a mc that is so submissive to his own people and doesn't have any type of ambition( of creating a empire, conquer something and do some other things) doesn't feel right to me if you get what I'm saying.

    Ch 1 CHP 2
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    project failed
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  • Mauro_Ceita_4145
    Mauro_Ceita_41451yr
    Commented

    Great start keep going with the good work.

    Ch 1 Reborn
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    One piece: Old generation
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  • Mauro_Ceita_4145
    Mauro_Ceita_41451yr
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter

    Ch 48 Ninth Member
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    One Piece: The strongest female pirate crew
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  • Mauro_Ceita_4145
    Mauro_Ceita_41451yr
    Replied to Orthanos

    I don't think there's anything weird with it because she's a giant so it's normal for him to have this much increase and you forgot that the system only accept people that have no evil intention with mc on the crew?

    Ch 30 Seventh Member.
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    One Piece: The strongest female pirate crew
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  • Mauro_Ceita_4145
    Mauro_Ceita_41451yr
    Replied to The_Titan_Atlas101

    Cause she was a poll result that author did so she became mc woman and the crew musician

    Ch 11 Chapter 10: *A Little Slice of Heaven*
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    One Piece: Rise of Achilles (One Piece Fanfiction)
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  • Mauro_Ceita_4145
    Mauro_Ceita_41451yr
    Replied to KingRapha

    It's the anbu positions if I'm not wrong

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  • Mauro_Ceita_4145
    Mauro_Ceita_41451yr
    Replied to creatorGod

    Are you good??🤨🤨

    Ch 9 walking training
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    Reborn with perfect instant mastery skill
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  • Mauro_Ceita_4145
    Mauro_Ceita_41451yr
    Replied to Mountain_Dew_98

    (☞ ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)☞ ⁿᵒ ᵖʳᵒᵇˡᵉᵐ That's good to know, you got me excited with the powers he have and the technology he could make. One question you gonna make the ff as a multiverse? If so, do you already have the world's in mind?

    Ch 13 First Day At UA
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  • Mauro_Ceita_4145
    Mauro_Ceita_41451yr
    Replied to Mountain_Dew_98

    He's saying that if you want to make mc a shadow type of hero that is more in the Shadow's (like being a discreet type of hero) it's kinda ok, but don't make him pretend to be a weakling so that afterwards he shows that his op.

    Ch 13 First Day At UA
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    MHA: Dark Angel
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  • Mauro_Ceita_4145
    Mauro_Ceita_41451yr
    Replied to JOKER_JAY

    Yes bruh.. It says in the chapter that he can only get two templates and he can't choose them.

    Ch 1 The beginning
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  • Mauro_Ceita_4145
    Mauro_Ceita_41451yr
    Replied to TwilightMist

    Right!! 😂😂

    Ch 59 Accepting Disciples (Part One)
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    Protagonist Abuser Chat Group
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