great book and well writen so a solid rate it however has goody tooshoo vibes and i personally hate when heroes never just finish the villian off as it is stupidly childish and idealistic. great book if your into the cliche white knight thig though.
started strong but the amout of bs happening from chap 60 on has gotten plain stupid. love the beginning but seriously dropping the ball like you forgot your own plot and the amount of buffs given to EVERY ONE may as well scrap the original story and make a real novel with diff names
you some how took a great idea good back story and great character and managed to make it very boring to read i got to ch 130 and something like 80 chapters are just skill or technique descriptions and the mc monologing about ideas for more skill/techniques
Amazing character creation the plot has yet to fully develope at this point but alot of backround is being created for both the mc and other main characters. fantastic so far
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Tyler_Regal2yr
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See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule