would love to see the zygarde lore in this world if u create one different cells combining then removed goes back to cell etc etc ..

yes it's a good character enough has small flaws and some positive moments that's good enough..

For further experiment u can have a Pokemon learn a move that's not in its nature just like emboar a fire type can learn a water type move scald, so something similar u can experiment in dis world

its a great story so with little bit of biology he can change abilities to a limited time frame by extensive use and discipline cannot change nature but can mold accordingly to fit it's purpose excellent idea on the slaking line, great to incorporate annihilape evolution as well and scythers branch & stone (kind of) evolution I would love him to have castform and use its form changing and revert back to castform also ditto or smeargle where can learn one move or have an ability which mimics someone or some pokemon would love to see how u add that in this Pokemon world

hope he gets a big flying type so he can ride them same for water and land Pokemon big enought for him to ride and hope u describe the size and shape of each Pokemon alongwith the biggest average shape and size of particular Pokemon since the shape and size as per pokedex of some pokemon is weird hope u describe them. Great addition to the team bulbasaur hope she becomes versatile member to the team

wanted him to catch a starter great he caught a bulbasaur , it can be a versatile hope u make it a versatile Pokemon and not just a Pokemon who is used for sleep powder and vine whip

cool.. for both machoke and other means by which Pokemon can raise their talent

I kind of feel u have sidelined machoke for rhydon since he was his starter and kadabra since he has a better talent than machop machoke, it's kind of sad that only resources can improve their talent hope u also find something that can improve the talent other ways apart from resources and hope u also upgrade machoke

My doubts on pokemon who does not evolve and Pokemon who has single evolution how can they improve their potential .

I hope he finds item for all of his Pokemon before their evolution and raise their talent and not to compare other trainer Pokemon to his Pokemon in terms of talent

would like Orion rhyhorn and machop to witness a battle between 2 wild old rhyperior around 80 level in a very remote location and help his team and himself understand the power of high level Pokemon along with high talent and also gather the carcass or help the wounded rhyperior back to health and gain some experience moves from him and also item to help him to evolve in rhyperior .

does beedrill here make honey , that would have been better than berries and shiny stuffs should have some precious items will they invade butterfree spearow and pidgeys dug out and loot their riches that can help improve the latent talent of his Pokemon.. looking forward to his adventures in the innermost parts of jungle before his journey...

Now the story is moving, he needs Pokemon that can help him travel it may not be a battler but can defend him and itself from attacks for water lapras is perfect for teleport Pokemon that can learn teleport arcanine can be used it can be a land carrying Pokemon with teleport ability and for flying a big flying type pokemon

so u changed the cover art of the story looks like a gengar .

great 100 PS for your work awesome..

great chapter, atleast he has decided not to be a single type specialist and had some good reasoning behind it, u kept it realistic and not fairy tale as if raising a Pokemon would be easy they could kill in an instant ,great chapter looking forward to it.

it will be interesting to see how a baby Pokemon reacts to the psychic environment will it learn any psychic type moves or have some inclination towards it, some interesting patterns to have I hope he does not become one type Pokemon trainer I hope he have a diverse team bcoz that adds element to the current story and new ideas to create training and battle strategoies.

Good to know he got nothing special common Pokemon not rare that's good enough and also a baby Pokemon, when it will grow out of the baby stage Orion can ride on him, would love to see how u keep egg moves and tutor moves in this world, would be great to see the bond he can create with rhyhorn.

the world u have created dark psychic and poison types are better for trainers who are starting out and needs to be safe.flying ground grass & water type for finding out items and escaping through air or underground

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