6 Explanation

I read the comments and will admit that I did go off plot and created lots of loopholes but I will try to mend it. The only reason I got supernatural in this book is for it to create a ending that I have been having in my mind and the only way I saw to bring it into play is to have a part of supernatural as teen wolf just have shifters so then the ending will be confusing to many people and just to put it out there this Fic is just a test run as I have little writing experience and am trying to build on it 

I am reading all comments as well to see where I can to better to improve so that future work wont be as sloppy as this one so please cope with me as I will try to fill gaps in the loopholes I created 

The reason I had Dean merge with Stiles is so that he would gain his experience in fighting as if I had him learn on his own I would not be able to write much about it and would have to hold off on plot in order to make his growth seem realistic 

Now as to how he got fit in chapter 1 well lets just say I did not think that through 

Any other questions in the comments I will try to answer and for those who don't like the little piece of supernatural added I'm sorry but know that it will only be mentioned for this short while 

Now for the comment on Lilith Yes Dean would be able to get Lilith out of Allison's body easy Stiles would not as he suffers from Anxiety in the series so he would not be able to think straight but there are many other points you made that is true but it is my first fanfic that I plan to finish so I did not plan to go deep into lore but I am trying to get better in writing lore and to structure my books which I test in my original book so I hope that clears things up for 

Any more comments on what is wrong or how I can improve to write better pieces in the future will be welcomed as I really want to get good at writing and thanks to those who commented to make me see where I went wrong and I will try to fix it and if you have any ideas on how I would gladly accept and use it Bye

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