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Like the way you do things on this one too man, but the characters not being given space man. The protagonist is eating everything by himself. Want to see other people's ideas and opinions on things especially those he interacts with. Give them more importance and role power. Ooh and add more chapters on the other novel, suddenly stopped updating it making me hurt. Still looking for next chapters and can't see them.
Nice work.. Understandle work with a good start, especially how Wang Bi's family sells him for benefits. Starting with him being sent off to a mariage. And the development from discovering the existence of a system to introducing characters slowly to merge with the situation. Especially that Old woman Hei that is described as Ruruo's bodyguard. She also is introduced but more importantly she revels her identity. As for chapters one per day seems acceptable. The world background described in the story seemed to be developing slowly, and some secrets being revealed as the novel progress. The best example being how power is distributed, and the ancient texts that contain some martial arts or even important skills. They all seem to describe something but not in detail to make me very attracted and continue reading.
What's with the arranged marriage sh*
OK You are definitely getting me hyped just wondering how high the realms you plan to push your characters to. I like how the explanations seen detailed to situations or things new to readers. Making sure we are all on the same page is a good thing, otherwise some readers might end up leaving halfway. Waiting to see how far you go.
Is she a cultivation genius in a world that has just started on cultivation
Haha removing sense of self