Like the way you do things on this one too man, but the characters not being given space man. The protagonist is eating everything by himself. Want to see other people's ideas and opinions on things especially those he interacts with. Give them more importance and role power. Ooh and add more chapters on the other novel, suddenly stopped updating it making me hurt. Still looking for next chapters and can't see them.
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