Nice work.. Understandle work with a good start, especially how Wang Bi's family sells him for benefits. Starting with him being sent off to a mariage. And the development from discovering the existence of a system to introducing characters slowly to merge with the situation. Especially that Old woman Hei that is described as Ruruo's bodyguard. She also is introduced but more importantly she revels her identity. As for chapters one per day seems acceptable. The world background described in the story seemed to be developing slowly, and some secrets being revealed as the novel progress. The best example being how power is distributed, and the ancient texts that contain some martial arts or even important skills. They all seem to describe something but not in detail to make me very attracted and continue reading.
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