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Haki is the ability to sense spiritual energy (Kenbunshoku), use life force (Busoshoku) and dominate enemies (Haoshoku). Chakra is made by molding physical energy you can say in this fanfic that chakra is a derivation of haki, since both types of energy use Vital energy, that way you can create a good explanation of how the protagonist manages to do all these things
where the PIC?
Where are his wand
well i read as far as i could take it and in short we have a bizarrely mature protagonist he is 16 years old and has no emotions, the original marvel characters were made senseless worse, nick fury who should be the greatest spy in the world talks to a child civil about tseract, loki and shield, his mother when he says he's saving the earth doesn't say anything he just gives an understandable have a good day, nothing makes sense here. The idea of the story is good but the characters are very mocked better rewrite
this is pretty far-fetched, like a normal 16-year-old boy has just discovered S.H.I.E.L.D. one of the world's biggest secrets, and Captain America, who the whole world thought was dead and his first reaction is "I know you", I I don't know much about human feelings but a person would NEVER act like that, remembering that super powers are still not normal at that time, much less a secret agency. I recommend a rewrite of that chapter.
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ITS a good fic
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