well i read as far as i could take it and in short we have a bizarrely mature protagonist he is 16 years old and has no emotions, the original marvel characters were made senseless worse, nick fury who should be the greatest spy in the world talks to a child civil about tseract, loki and shield, his mother when he says he's saving the earth doesn't say anything he just gives an understandable have a good day, nothing makes sense here. The idea of the story is good but the characters are very mocked better rewrite
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