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Devil_Dragon785

Devil_Dragon785

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2021-08-17 JoinedIndia
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  • Devil_Dragon785
    Devil_Dragon7851yr
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    so the start of the novel is one of the best I've seen till now. it hyped me too much and my expectations of further chapters shot off the roof but that's where the problem began. i am not saying that the novel is bad it's just that i would have liked the dialogues to be but better. it seems like to much drama for me when MC talks to the maid. and he just goes on spouting details even when no one asked. example(little bit spoiler but not much) when he goes to tailor sand beat his son what did he say when tailor asked him who he was he said that he did that to protect himself but kept on to saying " I came here to hire you lots to prepare more than a hundred sets of fine costumes for me, but who would’ve thought a few mad dogs would try to bite me at the gate?” now or is a good line but what i think he could have said" i came here to hire you people but who would have thought that since dogs would try to bite me" Why add the extra details like the number of clothes when no one asked you to, i think it could be better this simple way. This has happened more than once. i don't know about others but it feels a bit annoying to me.

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  • Devil_Dragon785
    Devil_Dragon7851yr
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    i can try to keep up with other things but please give my boy his name back. It is dollar, not golden man. the translation is also a Little bit messed up but i can take it.

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  • Devil_Dragon785
    Devil_Dragon7852yr
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    i really likes this book. it have very interesting story and the humour is also very good, though I can't say much about the character development yet

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  • Devil_Dragon785
    Devil_Dragon7852yr
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    hlo author here so I am giving my own book less stars because of updating stability but I need some time before i fully focus on it. I hope u guys understand that and will continue to support me

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  • Devil_Dragon785
    Devil_Dragon7852yr
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    more potential and limits of skills will be revealed as skills level up

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    skill can not absorb energy directly from surrounding

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    fixed👍

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  • Devil_Dragon785
    Devil_Dragon7852yr
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    thanks , you always are one of the firsts

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    to make things less complicated system shows his total age since the time he was first born as human

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    noted👍

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    noted

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  • Devil_Dragon785
    Devil_Dragon7852yr
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    thank you (:

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  • Devil_Dragon785
    Devil_Dragon7852yr
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    I'm trying my best to do 1 chapter per day so keep supporting

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