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Exactly bro. The entire time I read this arc, it sounded way too racist like a standard Korean uncle. Good and bad sides exist in every city, state. Only highlighting the bad side of someplace isn't very appealing to read and is bound to cause discomfort in your viewers.
Don't introduce Alyssa bell. In my opinion, only canon characters should be included in harem. Also, corruption at this point is too cliche and avoid it if possible. The MC already has to deal with accusations against him and these settings are more than enough to keep the story interesting without the story sounding cringe.
There isn't actually a #mushokutensei tag. But you can add other useful tags such as reincarnation, action, overpowered or weaktostrong, etc. If not, then I would simply suggest to rename your fic and add 'mushoku tensei' in it, so that your fic shows up when someone is searching for a mushoku tensei fic. Ex:-Future Rudeus: (A Mushoku Tensei story)[img=recommend]
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