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i wonder whoooo the fiiiirst one iss
Adrian/Jiren.
Saitama must be nerfed as well since his gimmick is having immeasurable power but can only split clouds throughout the planet in two with a "serious punch". It appears my countless mentions of how Jiren is incomprehensibly restraining himself also eludes you. But let me elaborate on WHY, since you seem to lack any sense of reading between the lines. He does not need to utilize anywhere near his colossal reserve of ki. Remember that this is a normal human being with Jiren's abilities and memories. While he is certainly influenced a lot, even more than he bargained for, he is still a different person. The only facet of Adrian that was showcased was his "peculiar and logical thinking". So, fighting for the first time? You will get much more benefits with lowering your ki to match the opponent, and adapting to the power, memories and everything you've received. Even then, he still trashed everyone he met; because ultimately, they are meaningless when Jiren's talent, experiences and sheer power are seemingly unbeatable. Jiren will meet his match very soon, and a POINT will be made. The reason why I've picked this world and everything will hopefully make more sense. So even if your rating is grossly misleading because it completely disregards the entire story because of your "preference", I still got some insight on it. Not sure when, but I'll update the story to further clarify all events, so the reader has an easier time understanding what I had in mind.
It's Milus.
I have no idea what you're talking about. "keel over" means fall over, for instance after getting a heart attack or something.
Even a child of 5 years could be a "great ruler" with Rimuru's starter pack. And even then, it's just relative to the world he is in.
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Not a mistake.
WN and LN are different.
Not allowed. S rank is specially reserved for Heroes.
Scene change.
Fixed
No.
Incorrect. He is the natural order, and he can control himself, even if his natural tendency is to rage, just like you have the ability to hold back your urges. He improved in behavior after he met Rimuru, showing that in some shape or form, he is malleable. You also seem to be ignorant about the concept of "evil" in DnD system which has nothing to do with what is traditionally known as evil. It is "selfless" versus "selfish". Please tell me, where was Veldora ever selfless? As for the justice and judgment, its flaw is a plot point. Characters are not ideal and much like real life ones, have their own opinion. Whether that's correct? Time will tell :)
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milim is the girl who is fighting jiren. she has no idea who he is.
That's Milim. And yes.
New addition.
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