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sorry beforehand, I thought of one thing, from the beginning of the story you said he had an older brother, but so far you haven't written down his interactions with his older brother, Even with his family you only include a little interaction, and it seems you forget to introduce who his older brother is
Oh come on guys, I think you should watch one piece, There is a martial art called rokushiki and one of the moves uses fingers, I think you should try it use one finger make sure to keep your finger steady then move your finger with the highest speed you have then aim it at your opponent's stomach, I'll make sure your opponent will feel more pain than getting hit by a normal punch, I can guarantee that because I've often done that
I think it would be better if it was a hood, but that's fine too for a battle suit
yo, i think your translation is very good, Until this chapter I didn't find the Chinese term at all, and also no Chinese names, in contrast to multiple translations across different platforms, to be honest their translation is very bad, In fact, I often find Chinese terms, you know, such as the mention of his name which is different from the one in the original work, Call it the name of our thick eyebrow teacher, there is often called emperor kai, yes for us who are not Chinese it feels foreign but it's not bed huh, it's just a matter of translation but for his work I really appreciate it
it can't be compared, because mha takes place in modern times where there are more rules and restricts the free use of quirks so that it often hinders character development, And more often it gives the heroes the right to batter their opponents without being allowed to kill their opponents Yes, modern society's view of murder is more sensitive even if it's for self-defense reasons.As for bc they take a medieval setting which is more likely to be free and the power to speak more, Yes even though they have a law but sometimes it's just an alternative solution to the problem, Not only that, they are also freer in killing their opponents.
sharp weapons, firearms, martial arts, and war vehicles and their technology, were they created to kill? no !!!!! they exist to defend themselves, but unfortunately the greed and ambition of humans turn everything, then are we going to stop here? are we going to stop working? again no!!! my mother once said we can never predict the future but we can still look ahead, and as long as we have good intentions then we can only leave it to time and keep trying to pass our good intentions on to the next generation
why should you kill Ichiro's father? Are you saying that because you suspect that he was the one who spread the information about the 2nd Mizukage's departure? but this is not certain, I also thought maybe the cause of Ichiro's mother's death had something to do with the mizukage but this is still just my assumption, other than that reason I don't know
Remember the Hiruzen conspiracy? for the sake of clearing his name he informed that Kagami died on a mission, I forget if he told Kagami that he died at the hands of Aokiji or Kirigakure shinobi, but with the mizukage spreading Aokiji's success in the mission Kasumi surely understands who killed her father, but it's not clear who Kasumi is referring to in the list, maybe she's targeting someone else, we can only assume