your story is wonderful with writing, plots and everything, counting from the previous one before the rewrite, but when something "romantic" or "flirting" happens I feel something between disgust and cringe for how you copy it, I don't know, as if just by existing all women already want with him, it's as if all women in the story were super easy to fall in love with, well freya and artemis are understandable because of destiny and all, but rose felt like "yeah, I'm a first timer socializing, obviously I fall for your tricks even knowing that for quite some time I've catered to a lot of adventurers who tried to flirt with me, but you're not like that right? ". Well, that's my humble opinion and how I feel, anyway thanks for such a great story and sorry if I offended you. (translator)

what ?

Wow, we don't have eyes of divine rank anymore, how unfortunate.

I have always wondered, is it that he forgets who he has fought or what, only to be cut short by fighting a small student with a sword, when in the previous world he was fighting against beasts that could destroy countries in minutes. (translator)

Will the Mc always be physically weak and useless?

In the instead of comedy it gave me it was a pity

because it has some chapters that cause me so much anger or laziness, and then come out with one like these that give me so much emotion, thanks for the story.

If I skip the whole backstory, will I see something that I won't understand later in the main story?

without wanting to sound rude, really the only thing he came up with was to create a group chat that will be messing with everything he does, it seems to me something super unnecessary and boring especially because they are all too strong entities that are going to tell him everything just because they feel sorry or because they think he deserves everything for his sad story, or because they want to ask for forgiveness as if they have human feelings (feeling that what they did is wrong) and feel they should give everything to the protagonist just because they do

I see, again a lapdog of a princess, forced by a weak ret he could kill at any time, what a shame, so many years of suffering and when he is reborn with more time to train again treated as a toy.... I expected a lot from this story 👍🏽

wow, even the force is convenient to the plot.

What are the others ?

what magic is that?

thank you, everything is fine now.

do you have to put up with 15 chapters of such horrendous writing?

Forced until I can't do it anymore

Aren't they 10-year-old children? It feels more and more strange that they do those things so obvious when they are still children.

Am I the only one who gets the chapter like this?

I'm sorry if I complain about your story, but that game with momo and the others is disgusting to me, they are a 6-year-old boy, not at least teenagers, they are CHILDREN (translator)

in book must have all the characters of black clover, shouldn't he do something intelligent and read about all the magics that exist since he has no desire to reincarnate? (translator)