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Jean_Smith_3920

Jean_Smith_3920

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2021-08-08 JoinedGlobal
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  • Jean_Smith_3920
    Jean_Smith_39202yr
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    Not truly a friend.

    I tried to talk to Emma, she then ignored me and left. Zander just looked at me and then left.
    TO THE MEAN MATE
    Fantasy · Amy_Reason
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  • Jean_Smith_3920
    Jean_Smith_39202yr
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    Nice story so far. Although you need an editor or an app like Grammarly that spell checks and helps with grammar.

    Ch 6 {5}CONFUSION
    TO THE MEAN MATE
    Fantasy · Amy_Reason
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  • Jean_Smith_3920
    Jean_Smith_39202yr
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    PLEASE gat an editor! But don't leave to get one. There are apps like Grammarly that can help with spelling and grammar.

    Ch 1 PROLOGUE
    TO THE MEAN MATE
    Fantasy · Amy_Reason
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  • Jean_Smith_3920
    Jean_Smith_39202yr
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    See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

    Ch 11 Our own fight
    My Long Lost Mate
    Fantasy · winterdaisy55
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  • Jean_Smith_3920
    Jean_Smith_39202yr
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    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 196 Star - Honeymoon Part 2 (MATURE)
    Rescuing His Captive Mate: Saving The Future Luna
    Fantasy · Deni_Chance
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  • Jean_Smith_3920
    Jean_Smith_39202yr
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    i hope this isn't from the writer that made me pay for 15+ repeated chapters. If it is, I won't buy it

    Ch 9 Chapter 7
    Rejected (A Werewolf Story)
    Fantasy · adaezexo
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  • Jean_Smith_3920
    Jean_Smith_39202yr
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    Who is Kieran? I thought his name was Aurillius?

    "Kieran, what are you doing?" I asked gently, not wanting to break his concentration.
    His Rogue Luna
    Fantasy · Goddess-Of-Dawn
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  • Jean_Smith_3920
    Jean_Smith_39202yr
    Commented

    How much is an editor??? I'll pay it for this writer......if I ever read another story they wrote.😤

    Ch 30 Chapter 32
    His Rogue Luna
    Fantasy · Goddess-Of-Dawn
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  • Jean_Smith_3920
    Jean_Smith_39202yr
    Commented

    No votes, no gifts! repeat chapters!! argh!

    Ch 27 Chapter 29
    His Rogue Luna
    Fantasy · Goddess-Of-Dawn
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  • Jean_Smith_3920
    Jean_Smith_39202yr
    Commented

    No more gifts or votes should be given since there are so many repeating chapters. Although the story is amazing, I'm tempted to quit it because of the errors in spelling, grammar and repeat chapters.

    Ch 24 Chapter 26
    His Rogue Luna
    Fantasy · Goddess-Of-Dawn
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  • Jean_Smith_3920
    Jean_Smith_39202yr
    Replied to Jean_Smith_3920

    The mate bond

    Ch 18 Chapter 20
    His Rogue Luna
    Fantasy · Goddess-Of-Dawn
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  • Jean_Smith_3920
    Jean_Smith_39202yr
    Commented

    the matter bond is leaving because of the distrust and hated.

    Ch 18 Chapter 20
    His Rogue Luna
    Fantasy · Goddess-Of-Dawn
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  • Jean_Smith_3920
    Jean_Smith_39202yr
    Replied to NovaLuna

    Yes. I wish the writer would get an editor or the Grammarly app!

    "And my parents, there dead aren't they?" I had this feeling that they were. I never suspected they were alive and as a result, never looked for them or any family I might have had. Not that I would have known where to find them.
    His Rogue Luna
    Fantasy · Goddess-Of-Dawn
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  • Jean_Smith_3920
    Jean_Smith_39202yr
    Commented

    So far so good.

    Ch 4 Chapter 4
    Littlest Werewolf
    Fantasy · ElleNigma
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  • Jean_Smith_3920
    Jean_Smith_39202yr
    Commented

    What demon? What did it do to Liam? This story is VERY disjointed, rough and needs an editor DESPERATELY!

    Ch 25 Captured
    Fated
    Fantasy · Jay Mhekzyy
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  • Jean_Smith_3920
    Jean_Smith_39202yr
    Commented

    Ummm, when did Aiden save her from falling to her death?

    Ch 21 Founders ball pt 2
    Fated
    Fantasy · Jay Mhekzyy
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  • Jean_Smith_3920
    Jean_Smith_39202yr
    Commented

    Moreover......? Please don't be so formal in your writing. I think English isn't your first language as your writing doesn't flow. PLEASE get the app Grammarly! It will help with punctuation and grammar.

    Ch 8 Hickey
    Fated
    Fantasy · Jay Mhekzyy
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  • Jean_Smith_3920
    Jean_Smith_39202yr
    Commented

    PLEASE stop with the word ... whilst!!!! Next book you write, just delete it.

    Ch 3 Chapter 3: Weird dream
    Fated
    Fantasy · Jay Mhekzyy
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  • Jean_Smith_3920
    Jean_Smith_39202yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Luxury car

    Ch 122 Alpha Male
    Falling in Love with the King of Beasts
    Fantasy · AimeeLynn
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  • Jean_Smith_3920
    Jean_Smith_39202yr
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    See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair

    Ch 87 The Dance
    Falling in Love with the King of Beasts
    Fantasy · AimeeLynn
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