No more gifts or votes should be given since there are so many repeating chapters.
Although the story is amazing, I'm tempted to quit it because of the errors in spelling, grammar and repeat chapters.
Yes. I wish the writer would get an editor or the Grammarly app!
"And my parents, there dead aren't they?" I had this feeling that they were. I never suspected they were alive and as a result, never looked for them or any family I might have had. Not that I would have known where to find them.
Moreover......?
Please don't be so formal in your writing. I think English isn't your first language as your writing doesn't flow.
PLEASE get the app Grammarly! It will help with punctuation and grammar.