The opening chapters start off with a bang. An intriguing premise of the whole story for the readers to explore the later chapters and so on. A must read.
Fascinating. Did not expect it to be like this at first. Feels like these are all backstories and worldbuilding elements for the author's incoming project. A lot of potential waiting in on this. Keep up the good work.
A good start on the opening chapters. The sentence flow is immersive as they all string nicely together and are easy to go through. Good pacing flows throughout the chapters later on. A must-read for the fans of this genre.
A very good spin on the synopsis. The characterisation seems promising enough, A lot of potential to turn into something. Keep up the good work.
Not my preferred type of genre, but good pacing that flows throughout the chapters. A must-read for the fans of this genre. Added to the library for more chapters.
Currently read through chapter 9. the plot seems intriguing from what I have read so far. Got me hooked and added to the library. A good read indeed, .
A fascinating premise, the main protagonist, seemed likeable enough as of chapter 5. The story pacing is good, not too fast or not too slow. Found little to no grammatical errors. One valid criticism I can give is that you can try to change the cover picture of the novel. TBH, readers see the cover pic of novels and decide if they want to read it or not, regardless of how well crafted it is So I suggest you get a dedicated cover art for this novel.
Thank you for the review, and can you elaborate on the "natural whoops here and there," as I do my edits solo, it would be very helpful for me to avoid mistakes later on.
I am not used to reading this genre, so can't really say much about the overall plot, but from what I have seen, the characters are well developed, all the while following a good pace. A must-read for the readers of this genre,
Only 10 chapters for now but all I got to say is that the story seems like it has a lot of potential to turn into something big. Keep up the good work.
Good to finally see a sci-fi genre novel on this platform that is saturated with fantasy novels. It's a new novel with not many chapters, but I hope the writer will continue on with regular updates, A good read indeed.
The starting ramps off with enough potential to kickstart the reader to explore the later chapters. Read till chapter 10 as of now, and I think the story is intriguing enough to stretch it to hundreds of worth of chapters.
This was not what I was expecting but still made me want to know more about what happens next. A good read indeed, added to the library and waiting for more chapters.
Only 6 chapters but that was enough for me to know it has potential. The character development in each chapter looks promising along with the general direction of the plot. Waiting for more chapters.
Need more chapters but from what I have read so far, the premise of the plot has a lot of potential, waiting for more chapters to give an overall review, but so far so good. Keep up the good work.
Only read 14 chapters as of now but the characters all seems well written and the general direction of the story looks promising. A good read and added to my collection.