It had One of the best potential to become one of the best story in WN. Yet author butchered this because of his over detailed writing. Sometimes he doesn't finish a arc where it should've been finished,and writes some pov or story that no body cares about. Sometimes it just feels like he is milking this story.Sometimes it just feels so frustrating to read that i even get the itch to just fucking punch the author through my device. If he didn't do those thing this story could've been so close to reaching the level of shadow slave.Even if it didn't reach that level it still could've been more popular then it is now.

calm down "I'm 14 and this is deep" guy.

Yes.Die boy. Kill yourself, end this story.

What a stupid way to do it.

yeah but also bad. Now he will act like a trainer.Which will slow down the story.Good for the author i guess because he will get told increase the word and chapter count,🤣

His charisma skill is going to be his biggest hack.

Yeap of all hate i had for the story. One thing went the right way. Making them splitt was the perfect decision. This way both of them will be able to show their full potential and value. If they remained together ones potential and value might get overshadowed by the other one. and also the game will become too easy if both of them are in the same team.

yeah it's frustrating and sad to see that he can't show his potential. And it can be seen from the number of comment that people also didn't read/or continue Because of those reason

i don't know why but i want them to split up.Nothing is more enjoyable then brother's rivalry.

are we going to read him as the underdog always? Will he join weak teams and beat the top teams?I want to know. Because i don't want to waste my time on a underdog story. Is he going to be op?

Looking good. But please give star the respect she deserve like this chapter. The manga destroyed her.

Daddy Allen all the way.

Why doesn’t his parents ask him about him not pitching?

Wow a great to reaction to someone who literally carried his team for so many matches and tournmant

this novel is a great mixture of hitting zone and The G.O.A.T. One have the system like zachary has for football. And the other one has monstrous hitting talent like jack of hitting zone. I'm enjoying this duo.

i don't know. I am laughing Every Time i see this.

Slower then a snail. Milking until the End.

everything was good except the mc.He was tge biggest letdown of the whole novel. And reason is author wasn't able to portray what he wanted to show. Like from the start of the novel he was hailed as a genius and intelligent guy but throughout the whole novel only thing we saw us how stupid he is. The author even dumbed down the whole world's iq and eq to make him look like a genius yet that wasn't able to hide the flaw of his character. You have to think out of the box to properly write a intelligent character which unfortunately the author wasn't able to.

yay