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Abdul_Alshibly2mthCommentedYou can hate him but he is right
"If the two Rulers of Elements can't face one Head Priestess of Water, then I don't think they were capable of getting Eye of Osiris in the first place. The Head Priestess of Water is nothing before what they might face in the Royal City. And in that place, Gabriel is going to be alone as well," Lambard explained as he took another sip of his tea.- Abdul_Alshibly2mthCommented
bargaining 100
"One month is too little. I want the ring for a lifetime." - Abdul_Alshibly2mthCommented
I mean he didn't ignore cultivation he is just cultivating something different *wink*
"This is the path of sincerity!" Gu Hai said as his eyes lit up, "Wonderful! Who would have thought that farming would help your heart be one with nature? It's a Grand Path as well!"detail10,000 Years In A Cultivation Sect: I Obtained A Powerful Technique From The StartEastern · Li Baijin - Abdul_Alshibly2mthCommented
I am studying the blade, while the others are fooling with their blades wait that's not how it goes
I’m Farming While the Others Are Cultivatingdetail10,000 Years In A Cultivation Sect: I Obtained A Powerful Technique From The StartEastern · Li Baijin - Abdul_Alshibly2mthReplied to Lou_0659
Hey actually the author wrote a reply a month ago if you can't see it here it is copy pasted: I’ll release new chapters from next month I haven’t dropped this book yet. I mean the month is already over so maybe next month or never. I really liked the novel these first 200+ chapters were really enjoyable to read but I stopped at a good chill point to stack up on some chapters.
- Abdul_Alshibly2mthReplied to Hedjave
The novel's extra
►Luck : C (new) - Abdul_Alshibly3mthReplied to Zurbluris
nope not yet I will do it
Moments stretched into eternity as Akun's body shifted and changed. Limbs elongated, muscles toned and defined, and his silver armor seemed to meld seamlessly with his new physique. When the brilliant light finally faded, a handsome human male stood in Akun's place. - Abdul_Alshibly3mthReplied to Magecrafter
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Alright please see my review that I posted I hope you can incorporate some of the points into the rewrite version
Moments stretched into eternity as Akun's body shifted and changed. Limbs elongated, muscles toned and defined, and his silver armor seemed to meld seamlessly with his new physique. When the brilliant light finally faded, a handsome human male stood in Akun's place. - Abdul_Alshibly3mthReplied to _michael
Oh that makes sense
This resulted in many of the top rankers who relied on their abnormally long playtime losing their status as rankers and new ones rising. - Abdul_Alshibly3mthCommented
so every time I achieve a breakthrough I should sit in my dusty room to clean it?
The formless waves released ripples in the air around him and even cleared off the dust on the table. - Abdul_Alshibly3mthCommented
Well guessing Rosa was in Brackets and Rei was without, Rei is the name she has revealed and Rosa is a secret
"Huh? No nothing really, Rosa was it? Can you get me a glass of water, juice, or anything cold and drinkable? - Abdul_Alshibly3mthCommented
How? wouldn't the high level rankers use these 10 hours and stay in their rank if other people can only use 10 hours too?
This resulted in many of the top rankers who relied on their abnormally long playtime losing their status as rankers and new ones rising. - Abdul_Alshibly3mthPosted
Mild spoilers till ch 19: The biggest turn off was the character introductions and development. The MC felt very flat his motivation to grow stronger made sense but I didn't feel any weight in it. His companions development felt very rushed and his interaction with the orc tribe was also flat. The trouble he get into in the Orc Tribe was absolutely unnecessary and the MC acknowledges this. It's normal for MCs to make mistakes as it is normal but this one just didn't have enough drive behind it to make it a mistake based off feelings it was just stupid. Till Ch. 19 there is very little world background. The writing quality is alright slight spelling mistakes but not too noticeable. All in all not my type of novel I was hoping for more depth. Hopefully my review comes as helpful for the author.
- Abdul_Alshibly3mthReplied to Rilial
Yeah I think this is what this novel is missing actual character introduction and development. The Interactions are way too quick and the development doesn't make sense most of the time
The black dragon's eyes sparkled with a mixture of nostalgia and amusement. "You remind me of myself when I was young," he said, his voice filled with a hint of fondness. "So full of determination and resolve. It's been a long time since I've encountered someone like you." - Abdul_Alshibly3mthCommented
Well yes it worked but this is something he never calculated. He just went for it at the danger of dying. I hope this changes in the next chapters
With the communication talisman in his hand, Akun couldn't help but feel pleased. "This is great," he thought to himself. "Having someone with healing spells I could call could really come in handy in case of emergencies. Plus, Azara could give Ivy some tips on casting spells. It's a win-win situation." - Abdul_Alshibly3mthCommented
well either you become slave or win
"I can't possibly use the silver rail gun, it'll cause way too much damage and everyone in the Colosseum could get seriously wounded.' - Abdul_Alshibly3mthCommented
exactly why would you even do this for some nobodies??
In the midst of the charged atmosphere, Akun's thoughts churned with concern, his mind racing to assess the situation. "This is bad," he conceded in the recesses of his thoughts, "really, really bad. I didn't know that she was at the monster grade stage two. Why did I get myself into this mess anyway?" - Abdul_Alshibly3mthCommented
why
In the opulent throne room, a tempest of emotions brewed within Akun as he listened to Keleora's caustic words. Irritation seeped into every fiber of his being, fanning the flames of his anger. In a moment of unrestrained fury, he stepped forward, closing the distance between himself and Keleora, and delivered a resounding slap across her face.