Review Detail of Abdul_Alshibly in Evolution begins with an ant colony

Mild spoilers till ch 19: The biggest turn off was the character introductions and development. The MC felt very flat his motivation to grow stronger made sense but I didn't feel any weight in it. His companions development felt very rushed and his interaction with the orc tribe was also flat. The trouble he get into in the Orc Tribe was absolutely unnecessary and the MC acknowledges this. It's normal for MCs to make mistakes as it is normal but this one just didn't have enough drive behind it to make it a mistake based off feelings it was just stupid. Till Ch. 19 there is very little world background. The writing quality is alright slight spelling mistakes but not too noticeable. All in all not my type of novel I was hoping for more depth. Hopefully my review comes as helpful for the author.