Oh…i get the premise but still, a boring development regardless. Don’t think I’ll continue with the story, thanks for the chapters prior though.

Tf is team reincarnators??? Huh??????? -1

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I’ve read this before, in the next couple chapters he goes to the grandmaster who said the hat is a priceless treasure after trying to take it off and failing and hitting it with Tang San’s spirit hammer.

Has changed cover more then has updated chapters, -103 social credit

I don’t understand the point of the MC.

I mean I still stand by what I said, it doesn’t really matter to me if it is a translation service error or an error of the author being lazy. Like sure do whatever but I don’t really foresee this really picking up for your pa treon if you are trying to get people to go and buy it from reading this. It just seems kind of grubby(idk if that’s the term I’m looking for in my inebriated brain) to try and market a poorly translated book by saying, “if you have issues with something, buy my pa treon; it’s better there; promise :)”.

Interesting premise, terms of address(he/her/etc.) constantly are swapped which makes a rather annoying reading process. 5.3/10

Oh word, I was just confused since the title didn’t change when I clicked on it and I was under the impression I was reading some random DxD book and the content just did not mesh lol.

I read up until just after the dragon/drake/whatever fight and honestly this book is just soooo slow. Events spread 3-5 chapters for just a location/fight description, yet he managed to cross a literal ocean in less then a chapter. The storytelling and writing itself are quite good, but it’s just agonizingly slow paced. Like I am at almost 100 chapters but like 3 days have passed since he crossed. This book would cost quite literally hundreds if not thousands of dollars to unlock once it is completed based on this pacing. I don’t mind slow paced books, don’t get me wrong, but when it is marketed as an action transmigrator and nothing has happened for character/plot development; I just cannot justify actively engaging/being invested in something like that. Please don’t take this as me just railing on your hard work and passion, I genuinely do not think it is a bad book, I personally just feel like it falls short of going from a decent book to a great book by it being too drawn out and slow paced. Unfortunately, for me, this just falls short.

Wasn’t this a DxD Riser book??

So this is RWBY with a system from “I went to another world and became extraordinary in the real world” or whatever it’s title is?

Was decent, kept my interest for the whole 2 chapters out. Dropped probably tho

The story is decent, but the author is only interested in getting interaction/subscriptions and once that slows down due to the slow updates/uninteresting filler chapters they drop and make a new book. This book is already essentially dropped from what I was said in the most recent chapter.

Story seemed alright in the 14 free chapters, length of chapters is short and hardly any actual story development to make it worth it for me personally to spend actual money to read. Especially with how expensive it would be for relatively short chapters. I’ll use my free passes to read it if I remember but otherwise will remain on chapter 14.

So are all your books just going to stop partway? If you had at least one finished book I wouldn’t of asked but you seem rather notorious for dropping literally everything you start. I don’t want to waste time getting invested in a book just for you to decide it’s not getting enough interaction for you so you’re just going to stop and make a new cashgrab.

It’s because you update slowly and when you do update it isn’t really anything of substance just filler.

It’ s alright, it just takes a couple rereads/thinking on certain bits to get it.

The English is all correct from a technical/grammatical point of view, but it just flows very poorly. Almost like a mtl that someone who only partially knows English went thru and edited.

He was never ”evil” tho? He does things in his own interest regardless of the morality of said actions. He cares for lily so it was in his own interest to attack the familia instead of him doing it for a righteous reason.