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Review Detail of DaoistMyDmZx in No More Pain For This Villain.

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DaoistMyDmZx
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Story seemed alright in the 14 free chapters, length of chapters is short and hardly any actual story development to make it worth it for me personally to spend actual money to read. Especially with how expensive it would be for relatively short chapters. I’ll use my free passes to read it if I remember but otherwise will remain on chapter 14.

No More Pain For This Villain.

Satan03

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Satan03
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Hi, Satan here 👋 I am glad the story is to your liking, I know it might be tough and a lot of problems might arise in future because of locked chapters but I'd like you to stay till the end It doesn't matter if it costs you actual coins or free passes. Ah!and don't worry I can guarantee that the story ahead is 100 percent worthy of every single penny you spend ❣️

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I read up until just after the dragon/drake/whatever fight and honestly this book is just soooo slow. Events spread 3-5 chapters for just a location/fight description, yet he managed to cross a literal ocean in less then a chapter. The storytelling and writing itself are quite good, but it’s just agonizingly slow paced. Like I am at almost 100 chapters but like 3 days have passed since he crossed. This book would cost quite literally hundreds if not thousands of dollars to unlock once it is completed based on this pacing. I don’t mind slow paced books, don’t get me wrong, but when it is marketed as an action transmigrator and nothing has happened for character/plot development; I just cannot justify actively engaging/being invested in something like that. Please don’t take this as me just railing on your hard work and passion, I genuinely do not think it is a bad book, I personally just feel like it falls short of going from a decent book to a great book by it being too drawn out and slow paced. Unfortunately, for me, this just falls short.

Satan03:Hi, Satan here 👋 I am glad the story is to your liking, I know it might be tough and a lot of problems might arise in future because of locked chapters but I'd like you to stay till the end It doesn't matter if it costs you actual coins or free passes. Ah!and don't worry I can guarantee that the story ahead is 100 percent worthy of every single penny you spend ❣️