and what about the manga, is it continuing? And how did you get it serialized? did the studio contact you or the artist?

Dude..........your writing improves every passing chapter.........thats natural though.........but if you have time give a read through previous chapter and correct some of the mistakes or maybe you can make it even more impressive. The plot is actually quite chilling................ just dont give it a romance aspect please that will ruin that chill in it..................make it as manipulative as you can............thats what we lack rn............ This story is a total thrill ride

Thank you everyone for supporting me till the WPC. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. please do tell me what I wrote wrong and how I can improve it. thank you

don't use many names in the story and what to say the story has 2 chapters rn.............so ATB to progress it.........when there are a pile of chapters to read i will be back

I won't do a false review here....You will improve as you write more chapters......well everyone does so but your story progressed a little fast for the first chapter and normal after that and it was good as fast paced chapters keep you more hooked.......currently on chapter 3.........well just a personal request but please write long chapters like around 1500-2000 words atleast as sometime leaving a cliffhanger makes the OP loose interest but i personally liked the stories as it is unique but even if you turn it into cliche it will be good........as cliche is imp for life

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guys please give me power stones so that i can win the WPC 286 I have the highest views but due to lack of power stones my rank is 5 my novel is Genghis khan's Acolyte- A Rising Havoc https://www.webnovel.com/book/genghis-khan's-acolyte--a-rising-havoc_23328009505896005

Well let me be honest.........I don't read these virtual MMO games stories anymore........but what kept me to your story isn't that its your writing style dude...........Its legit good..........Even if you make a mess in the story later on I promise your writing quality will save you for sure......keep writing stories and i will actively follow them.......

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the story is good and all but please show some more POV of main character as it gets boring with many dialogues. and it is quite good if you improve that aspect. give a try to my novel as well https://www.webnovel.com/book/genghis-khan's-acolyte--a-rising-havoc_23328009505896005

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bro i dont know how you thought of this story but now i am literally a fan of your.....i discovered about your novel after reading the manga and it is fabulous.....idk why the updates are so slow but you write in a very calm manner........i feel some sort of heart pain very rarely when reading these sad stories some of them which hurt me were .....your lie in april,tell me how to forget about you , grave of fireflies , orange and i want to eat your pancreas but now i have one more in my list.....this plot is not related to my life completely but i can somehow relate to it....please keep writing it......think of it as just a fan asking for a favor from you.....thank you and if possible please reply to my comment...it might make my day

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Please read my book as well I am new writer and my book is really good........ I am not lying. just give it a try My book is ' I am broken without you'