Review Detail of Bumbleboi in Turned By Doctor Vampire

I won't do a false review here....You will improve as you write more chapters......well everyone does so but your story progressed a little fast for the first chapter and normal after that and it was good as fast paced chapters keep you more hooked.......currently on chapter 3.........well just a personal request but please write long chapters like around 1500-2000 words atleast as sometime leaving a cliffhanger makes the OP loose interest but i personally liked the stories as it is unique but even if you turn it into cliche it will be good........as cliche is imp for life