Do it.

I'm universally gorgeous.

Don't forget the almost getting blown up thing because he was playing with his food, like a noob, without even knowing the location of his crew. Then allowed the agent to radio others about a "mermaid" while playing with said food, like a noob. Arrogant, ignorant, unearned confidence.

As of chapter 40-something, I just have to say, the MC and the way the story is going is annoying as fuck. She has all this power and she has no problem using it and yet, when it comes time for overly dramatic shit to happen that causes her pain or inconvenience, she's all like "why me?" Instead of compelling her mate to tell her the truth of the matter, she instead compels her mate to forget about her species and shit and then remember if she becomes a vampire. In the original, she knows her mate became a vampire in an incredibly traumatic way and it's likely that if she does become a vampire it will be in under very dire circumstances, so why leave that shit so unreconciled? If she was going to compel the girl anyway, why not do it in a way that could actually benefit them both, like learning the truth of the matter so she can maybe do something about it if her mate is being threatened? It's stupid, forced drama that relies on the MC being a whiny brat who would rather lament her circumstances and situation than try and solve them. It's fucking annoying. Also, who the fuck leaves their vulnerable, human mate, who they know originally had a horrible experience in the source material, and just fucks off with their entire family to another country for months, not leaving a single bit of protection behind to watch over their mate, and then just expects everything to be okay, while also being incredibly pessimistic. It makes no sense and it's incredibly annoying.

A Psych reference. My man.

Source?

Source material, if you please.

That was not the advice I wanted, but it was the advice I needed.

Nope.

Letterkenny.

Keep going. Just keep going, keep learning, living, keep exploring. If you travel far enough, mentally or physically, even if you look back, you won't even be able to see the past you left behind. Or at least, that's what a wise man once said.

Different roles for different contracts.

Yeah... I completely forgot about it.

Also, I changed that in the later chapters. I just didn't revisit the early one's because................................I've been busy. He's now one year younger than Elena.

On paper he is.

Did you get it fixed? I don't mind posting on fanfiction.net, since I already have an account over there. I just never really think about posting on it, but I don't mind. Let me know.

I'm already up to about chapter 60, so I need to start posting faster on here. I just rarely think about it. Maybe I should make myself a strict schedule........ahahahahahahahaha.

"If you have been having lower back pain, that's okay. Put in your order for Renesme, today. The only anti-inflammatory you will ever need." -Big Pharma Inc.

Reading comments is good, but letting them affect your flow will only lead you astray. Stay true to your path, young warrior. Besides, I like the character development that resulted in the jokes. He's finding himself and exploring what he likes. I say, omega good-job.

Sexist!