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Could you post a picture of the outfit [img=recommend]...
Well, guess it's my turn to review. First of, my favorite novel on Webnovel. I spend the rest of my time when I ain't binge reading comics right here. I tried making a mystery novel. Let's say it turned out like an elementary school piece. As a fellow writer (if I'm good enough to be considered one), this story blows my expectations out of the world. Author, keep up the great work! I will support through my power stones ('cause I'm too broke for any chance to give coins).
Well, I don't know. Probably because the one person she thought she could trust treated her like dirt. Imagine if you trusted someone with all your secrets and they treated you as trash. And it happened to you 3 times. That's what Anne is going through.
I have a theory/theories (to who killed Chloe and poisoned Lil). So stating the obvious facts, it could be someone Emma knows (Courtney), it could be someone who despised Emma's father (forgot the name), or it could be a gang. I think it's a gang of some sort. I think it's a group of people that either didn't like Emma's father or suspects Emma of being Madison in her past life. I might be making this up, but I think there was a time where someone was surprised to see someone else at some time, but that person didn't get revealed. As I said, I might be remembering this from a different story. (Off topic, but...) The guy who was paired with Courtney as a dance partner might come up later in the story. (Back to my really weird theory). I think someone is trying to wipe out the family and the death of Emma's father might have been murder. Anyway, that's what I though of at one point in time.
No problem! I absolutely love the story!
I might be wrong, but wouldn't it show more emphasis If you wrote "within a matter of seconds" instead is "minutes". Also it would be more accurate because she didn't wait for a whole minute to pass before she turned around. But great story! [img=update]
Where you at science lovers?
Lol, so would I!
Glad I'm not the only one!
You have a prince waiting at the castle . Don't forget!
That's it? I would have yelled and hit him as hard as I could.
I do agree her sister is acting outrageously, but I would say she has a BIT (not a lot, but a bit) of right to be mad. Imagine of your dreams got killed by someone very close to you. I think Beth knows deep down in her heart she loves Madeline and Maddie would happily switch places with her for Beth's happiness.
Please say Mrs
I believe you means Mrs