This makes a lot more sense then just cutting his hand off after boldly doing that in the homages office. Great chapter

Imo you could really do like a half page on the changes and then go into shibuya. If not then B

Personally haven’t seen one that keeps the duke alive so I’d like to see that for a change personally IF it works for the story you want to make. If not kill him off like you would need to. I think Damon could use a genuine father since yeah we know he was raised fremen and by 2 elders they’re still not his parents ya know and I think that would be a issue in his and Paul’s relationship. Love what you’re doing man please don’t drop lol

Kinda hate we’re killing off yuta tho won’t lie

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No thank you. I like the character but honestly I’m okay without it.

Thank you. Love the story so far I just finished the new halo show now I’m like I need reach 😂

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How much longer until the covenant and reach lol 😂 love this story just wondering js all

Assuming this is dropped that’s extremely disappointing

I absolutely love this. I’m just asking but have you thought about a time skip maybe? I have no problem reading him growing up at all was just wondering.

Of course when I drop this fanfic you update again. Please don’t do it a 3rd time

Okay okay gotcha. Won’t lie that would’ve been really dope to have mahoraga in his back pocket like a sacred gear

So will he be able to summon mahoraga? Or was it just like a gag.

Can you just cancel this already. You’re not going to post anymore anyways

Thank you

Characters a bitch tbh don’t understand why he acts hard then immediately turns into a coward

Tf you put kakashi whole life in here for

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Oh ok. Thank you