if we're talking about his power level, then the easiest would be to point at his cultivation technique which got stuck in bottleneck some time before his awakening (10 lv soul power) and he didn't have that issue from start, and he was cultivating from very early time so he WASN'T supposed to be full of spirit power, and for 'every twin has a 10lv of spirit power at the start', we have really not enough information about this, there could be more twins about whom we have no idea etc,

no? there was no info that every twin martial spirit master have 10lv(or higher), the only issue I have is that he is a Twin spirit and he have "ordinary" blue silver grass, from what I remember tang san had twin martial spirits because his spirit had similar "power level" and the first couldnt't absorb the second or smth, so there's my problem with this that "ordinary" blue silver grass and "god given" spirit, but if its's god given like Bo Saixi shouldn't he have only one martial spirit like her? unless this silver grass is at the "godly spirit LV "

it's a reference to one of his videos, where he destroyed his friend a lot of times ( in bed wars Minecraft if it is of any importance and every time he won and said " if you wish to defeat me train for another hundred years ", and in the next he would add next hundred etc.

(when I'm writing this there are 7chapters) . the start was promising, but the later in the story the more problems i had, why there are other people? from where are they? are they "alive" or juest NPC?, later you said that during some time playing with the system you bought shield, when in the next chapter this shop function is unlocked, why on the ranking #1 is LV 50 and next is just -1? I mean it's just weird that no one on this LV have the same LV, is 50 max? from where are the clans? you have some characters from history books on leaderboard and you use china and UK as one of the clans "locations"? xd, its weird, coc as a fic has a lot of potential and at least in my opinion you are wasting it, playing coc is time consuming, and the fic should be the same, I mean fck*n, imagine being thrown into this world as a major, or "king" for example starring from 0, even if the basic th can be boring from th5 you could for example add magic as from there you can unlock wizards in barracks if you are using game as a base, I have much more problems but im too lazy to write, so, I really wish you well with this novel gl

they added it like 2/3 weeks ago

well, I wouldn't dare if this would be irl 😅

What's the not translated name of this ff?

or maybe ? 🤔🤔🤔

imo aomine would be a better choice

thanks for the chapter, there are some things that you could change, decide in which person are you writing cuz reading third person and seeing I/me is just eyec-catching, posting more often with shorter chapters could be more effective if you want bigger audience, but long chapters like this are very appreciated, the dance would be interesting to read as it could be something akin to marriage in their tribe or smth ,ofc only if you want, and please don't drop 👌

funny

maybe he doesn't consider himself as him yet, or author just like this name

I know how it works, still even if she has the intelligence of a idk 9/10 y.o. at 10k, and higher later, I know, it doesn't change the fact that she is OLD, and the comment was purely about thsat, why would you even speculate that I don't know that when I commented about her age which was not mentioned before

maybe, but my comment was made only to remind that he WAS a wizard

it's kinda hard, why? because you want to add emotions to the text which is extremely difficult especially so that everyone has different perspective of them and can see them differently,

"saying that you made it", I don't remember if he was telling his mother about this book

saying not asking, she already knows as he told her, so she can't be asking

"while being confused"