Review Detail of tyfaa in CLASH OF CLANS CHAMPION

(when I'm writing this there are 7chapters) . the start was promising, but the later in the story the more problems i had, why there are other people? from where are they? are they "alive" or juest NPC?, later you said that during some time playing with the system you bought shield, when in the next chapter this shop function is unlocked, why on the ranking #1 is LV 50 and next is just -1? I mean it's just weird that no one on this LV have the same LV, is 50 max? from where are the clans? you have some characters from history books on leaderboard and you use china and UK as one of the clans "locations"? xd, its weird, coc as a fic has a lot of potential and at least in my opinion you are wasting it, playing coc is time consuming, and the fic should be the same, I mean fck*n, imagine being thrown into this world as a major, or "king" for example starring from 0, even if the basic th can be boring from th5 you could for example add magic as from there you can unlock wizards in barracks if you are using game as a base, I have much more problems but im too lazy to write, so, I really wish you well with this novel gl