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HeartSpills25dCommentedTake screenshots because he's just going to go back on his words once he meets another beautiful woman.😒 Could it be he intends to marry every beautiful woman he meets 🤨?
Furthermore, he also thought that he wanted to have a relationship with her for real. A person like him would never date her just for fun; he was thinking all the way to marriage.- HeartSpills2yrReplied to Erik_Hanson_7770
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Her eyes were sparkling, like agate that emitted a warm luster. Anyone who saw her would feel pity for her. - HeartSpills2yrCommented
Well...You are working great on that. 🤨🤨
He could feel her unsteady breath hitting his skin. The thing in his chest is going crazy. But he tries to hide it and stays calm. He wants to make her understand how he truly feels about her – not have an emotional breakdown. - HeartSpills2yrPosted
Good work author! 😍😍😍😍 I am a fan of the authors other work, 'HAM-IMWCS' and this doesn't lose to it at all. Now coming to the story, The writing and character design are both top-notch. There is a stepsister trope, but the father seems to be sane. I have long been annoyed of some other stories where the characters are said to be 'smart' while they are naive/dense/silly. Here, the characters are actually intelligent instead of being claimed as they are. It is still early, but it has an excellent potential. Hope this story gets picked up.