Luxray_is_Dog
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Why is Danzo asking Hiruzen like Hiruzen is his father and Danzo asking for more toys for to play?
You mean he can conjure these instrument permanently or what?
Bruh..
She maybe thought that he just lost some memory after what had happen to him.
Yesss...join us,join the bald sect and become the most overpower bald man.
What is that cube contain?Power stone or other thing?
This darmanitan got that terrorist blood in him.
Plot armour....
First of all you should start with big capital letters in your paragraph,as I can see you didn't start with it,though the pif is nice and all but for the long run it will be really annoying to read.Other than that i hope you can continue to improve this fanfic,do your best.
Is it the E.T looking monster?
That kid have seen some serious stuff......
It so cool that he can use his power like that bro.I love the fight scene so far and keep doing your best!!!!🫡
It well developed Indeed.......😏
NO WAY HARRY A WIZARD!?!Shocker never expected that......
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