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    Gog172mth
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    He took out an item from the store, a very special item, as it was an afro that he used in Whisky Peak to fight against Baroque Works. 
    One Piece - I Am A Different Luffy!
    Anime & Comics · RaccoonLeague
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    Gog173mth
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    The chapter was great. But please get a beta reader or something, I noticed a lot of spelling errors or words that didn’t make sense in a sentence or two.

    Ch 179  Chapter 179 - Smut 18+.
    One Piece - I Am A Different Luffy!
    Anime & Comics · RaccoonLeague
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    Gog173mth
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    No you’re all wrong. It’s MA. Ok dad joke done I’ll see myself out.

    I'm like your guardian. But since you asked the omniverse to let you have the powers of a specific multiverse, tell me, do you know what a Ra is?"
    Yu-Gi-Oh GX: Meta Player
    Anime & Comics · That_One_Dead_Ali
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    Gog174mth
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    The story premise is definitely interesting and would be worth reading, however I feel like character development is either rushed or isn’t there. One moment a woman’s being complemented by the MC, next she suddenly has feeling for him and only him. There is no subtle transition for the emotions. I will mention that I enjoyed how the world was built to incorporate the different elements from various anime. For recommendations to the author, try to give characters more interaction with each other. Instead of saying that “Rias just slept with him naked” and giving an explanation as to why she was naked, have a scene where Rias first sleeps with Ichigo and explains why she sleeps naked.

    Bleach DxD
    Anime & Comics · Phelio_n_Craze
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    Gog175mth
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    "Look at them. No Mister Invincible Bear fan will attack us." Luffy looked at the crowd that was looking at Bepo with stars in their eyes while still celebrating his victory over the agents.
    One Piece - I Am A Different Luffy!
    Anime & Comics · RaccoonLeague
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    Gog176mth
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    Sugar sugar yum yum, Poison hummed in her head, and Gwen finally felt her relax.
    Marvel: House of venom
    Movies · Mallison
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  • Gog17
    Gog171yr
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    "Candy or your life." I said while glaring at Nyx who was grinning.
    Percy Jackson : Rewind Time
    Book&Literature · Moonhorse
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  • Gog17
    Gog171yr
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    However, Luffy is still very curious about the uncle named Gaimon, who grows together with the treasure chest for 20 years, which is too strange. Can't it break the chest even if it falls from a slightly higher place? Or this uncle ate a Paramecia • Box-Box Fruit?
    One Piece: I Become Monkey D. Luffy
    Anime & Comics · Shinnn
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    Gog171yr
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    Gog171yr
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    Sitting on my bed I was meditating. I was currently using the Cosmo Force. Well I can't use it in it's purest form, that'd normally take about five years of training.
    Issei Hyoudou is the Summoner!
    Anime & Comics · DownfallstrikerX7
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  • Gog17
    Gog171yr
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    Ichigo is that you?!

    However, those thugs never learn; every time they recover, they bring back more mindless thugs to the point where I wondered where the fuck had gotten them from.
    Golden Deity: Slime in the Multiverse
    Anime & Comics · TianXian
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    Gog171yr
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    Anyone else think of the questions asked at the beginning of Pokémon Mystery Dungeon?

    "But first, what do you think of when you hear the word power?"
    RWBY: Remnant’s Outsider
    Anime & Comics · Arokey
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    Gog171yr
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    White tiger Sage?

    "Anyways the last thing I want to explain was your race. You're a primordial divine White Tiger who has been tainted with the life bloodline, making you a white tiger with the life variant. (Any good names for the race)?
    [DXD] A Primordial’s journey in the Multiverse
    Anime & Comics · Spabsta
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    Gog171yr
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    Exploring the World of To Love Ru
    Anime & Comics · Ayries_Jesea
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  • Gog17
    Gog171yr
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    Hello

    So just comment here so that I can see how much readers I actually have.
    [Dropped] Reincarnated In Bleach As A Vizard
    Book&Literature · Fly_you_fools
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    Gog171yr
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    "Ahhh... Heukk!" she grunted and didn't feel any pain when the hymen broke but rather felt pleasure.
    One Piece: The Ship of Lust
    Anime & Comics · muhned
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  • Gog17
    Gog171yr
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    I would give this a thumbs up, but I don’t want to ruin the 69

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    Gog172yr
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    I’ a bit surprised that you didn’ add an auto-adjust enchantment to them so that they fit whoever wears them.

    Hakai added a few more supplementary enchantments like the ones on his sword to make the gauntlet more durable and stronger. There was also the enchantments to keep the gauntlet clean all the time.
    Dragon In The Multiverse
    Anime & Comics · TeeNo
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    Gog172yr
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    🎵Ex~Cali~burrr!🎵

    When my blacksmithing level crossed 140, I was able to make Supreme grade swords. So I made myself a Supreme grade sword, the only one I have made so far. It involved months of work and this was with the help of clones. For a master blacksmith it will take years and even then it may not turn out as expected. My sword is a one sided sword with a slightly curved blade. The blade is midnight black, the guard and pommel are golden with various decorations. I was even able to permanently imbue armament haki into the blade. Usally that is done by using the blade for years, but I was able to add haki during forging thus imbuing the blade with it. As I have have a terrible naming sense I haven't named my sword, a supreme grade sword deserves a better name than what I named my first swords.
    In One Piece with Wood Style 18+
    Anime & Comics · yahska
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    Gog172yr
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    Just to clarify, but Marco and Alice are playing on a beach while Sara is still in the hands of the monsters who kidnapped her, right?

    Right now he was making a big sand castle with Alice, and both of them seemed to have fun. Alice used her tail to get more sand while Marco used Undine's powers to wet it and help Alice making the castle.
    Nine Tailed System
    Video Games · General_Paragon
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