The story premise is definitely interesting and would be worth reading, however I feel like character development is either rushed or isn’t there. One moment a woman’s being complemented by the MC, next she suddenly has feeling for him and only him. There is no subtle transition for the emotions. I will mention that I enjoyed how the world was built to incorporate the different elements from various anime. For recommendations to the author, try to give characters more interaction with each other. Instead of saying that “Rias just slept with him naked” and giving an explanation as to why she was naked, have a scene where Rias first sleeps with Ichigo and explains why she sleeps naked.
Phelio_n_Craze
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