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Ryan_4216dPostedThe first 50 or so chapters are very good and enjoyable, but after that, the author makes some seriously bizarre choices for the direction of some of his characters. I find it really ruins a lot of inter-character interactions and makes the overall storyline rather unenjoyable and muddled. Also, I find the author has a hard time really honing in on important character traits and their subsequent actions
- Ryan_421mthReplied to DaoistGatsu973[I assure you, you are of sound mind. I am a collection of intelligence and data called 'Sibyl'.]
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using the members on the crew at the time, you could easily inference that this took place before Thriller Bark
"I choose 2!" - Ryan_422mthReplied to world_domination
No, that's not applicable at all. He fought an army of 10 000 and died doing that. Even taking what you said as true, it still doesn't fit the requirements outlined by the author. The third Raikage never chose to become an ordinary person.
"In this world, there are also geniuses who surpass ordinary people, voluntarily become ordinary people, and finally die at the hands of ordinary people." Haku's voice is still very soft. - Ryan_422mthReplied to world_domination"In this world, there are also geniuses who surpass ordinary people, voluntarily become ordinary people, and finally die at the hands of ordinary people." Haku's voice is still very soft.
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This is an absolutely wild thing for the guy who literally values life on whether people are good or bad to say
"You know, I have come to learn that there are no good and bad people. We all have a little bit of light and dark inside us Diana. Life is not black and white, life has shades of gray, and if we don't learn this, the harder it is going to be for us to see the real world we live in." - Ryan_423mthCommentedCh 37 chapter 37 Water and Fire (Part 2)
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The requirements for acquiring conquers haki are not ambition and charisma that's ridiculous. If it was, there would be many more conquer haki users. Will is the central source of haki in One Piece. You can't have haki without will, and you can't have conquers haki without the will for it. Doflamingo definitely had a goal and definitely thought he would succeed no matter what. Also, that "next step" you talk about w Luffy and Kaido is conquers infusion. I also think that if that's all it takes to reach that "next step," the author really failed to keep power progression reasonable. Don't get me wrong, I don't think it's particularly awful, and i will continue reading at least for a while it just feels very phoned in and artificial to me.
Ch 45 Chapter 45: You Will Regret It, Sengoku! - Ryan_423mthReplied to Mr_Deadalus
That would have been cool if he didn't already have conquers haki. It's pretty silly to have him realize what's needed to achieve conquers haki and be a king while already being able to use it. It would have been way cooler if, with that realization, he was then able to awaken conquers haki. I think the part that's really dragging this novel down is writing yourself into corners where you're then forced to somehow write your way out of it, which always turns out feeling very phoned in.
Ch 45 Chapter 45: You Will Regret It, Sengoku! - Ryan_423mthCommentedCh 45 Chapter 45: You Will Regret It, Sengoku!
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I don't think those are really comparable scenarios bc in this, the women is doing it strictly for revenge. In dressrosa, she stayed because she was still the princess of the kingdom and didn't want to abandon her ppl alongside wanting revenge. Also, Doffy is well written, and his villainy is understandable due to his past experiences: from my knowledge, the mc I this is just a bad dude just to be a bad dude with no catalyst for it.
- Ryan_424mthCommented"Oh, I forgot to tell you something. Strictly speaking, this girl from the Nara clan is my disciple."
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Not being endangered for multiple minutes is crazy
Once activated, he won't be endangered within a short few minutes. As to what extent, Blaize has no idea and he didn't plan on testing it. - Ryan_424mthReplied to DaoistleEOSHKakashi commented, "My eyes are double-lidded, but you've transformed into single-lidded eyes. As a ninja, you need to pay attention to very detailed things."
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Roger's ship was named the Oro Jackson, which has nothing to do with any type of precious metal at all.
Vlad said: "Because the name of Pirate King Gol-D-Roger's ship is the Golden Jackson!" - Ryan_425mthReplied to ZAHAK
Most likely, there are very few Livebearing fish, and almost all of them are very small, like guppies
"Thank you, sir, for saving me, if you don't mind if you come to my house, I would like to host my rescuer properly" the mermaid said while blushing with embarrassment. - Ryan_425mthCommented"Human-Human Fruit, Model: Corpse Demon."