the story itself is good, but the translation is just horrendous, this is literally the worst translation work I have ever had the displeasure of reading
Ginormous_Madman
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LIKEBro, no offence, but if you didn't notice how horrendous the translation is especially in chapter 18 and the chapters close to that then you are probably blind or not knowledgeable enough in English to properly judge the writing on this fic.
Z_Ril:not so sure about that. i think it's quite decent. English is not my native language, but even i can tell that it's not as bad as you portrayed it to be. maybe he improved it?image
Sir_Squirrel:Bro, no offence, but if you didn't notice how horrendous the translation is especially in chapter 18 and the chapters close to that then you are probably blind or not knowledgeable enough in English to properly judge the writing on this fic.
Mtl poisoning... After a certain point, even if the text is written in Sumerian cuneiform or in a language that is a hybridization of ancient Arabic and Persian with Latin, it seems quite normal to you.
Sir_Squirrel:Bro, no offence, but if you didn't notice how horrendous the translation is especially in chapter 18 and the chapters close to that then you are probably blind or not knowledgeable enough in English to properly judge the writing on this fic.