Nicely done

This obsession with looks is funny. Yes it’s true that many people are employed because of their outward appearance and not necessarily because of their qualifications. I dislike this type of behavior. I want to be hired for my qualifications !!! I once got hired over the phone because of my voice 😄

Good work

Nice but grammatical errors persist

Okay let’s see what you are going to do to follow up

Running away is wisdom . Another day will come and chances are always presenting themselves . Now murong can achieve more strength and reach higher goals but if he’s dead all the hard work he put in would die with him!! Where’s the glory in that?!!!!!

Interesting

Grammatical errors misspelling But I like the progression of the novel

Jealousy will get you in hot water every time !!! Good Job

A little obsessed with looks !!! Some errors still abound however I like your descriptive words and imagery

Thank you

Hmm hopefully that is just a trial he went through and that’s not part of the developing storyline

Okay I’m waiting

Interesting chapter waiting for the progression

It’s shaping up to be a wonderful novel

Interesting

Great touch loving it!!!

Interesting

Nice job 👍🏼

Still liking the story and the pace