Yeah I know but some houses are built differently. Like my house has a main gate then a courtyard then my room, so I lock my room since a good thief can climb my main gate and sneak into my room easily.

Well it's rare for something like that to happen. Well Ig in the end it depends on what is the design or interior of the house you live in.

Wow a new character

Only Oda knows. For now we shall let him cook.

Idk man, OP characters can do anything. I mean Luffy is only 19 now and he is one of the strongest beings in OP.

That's the first time I am hearing such a word honestly.

But he still would have known about haki. He sailed with Roger, I think he let his hand get eaten.

I get that, I fear that too. Who in his/her right mind will even like ntr. But just getting paranoid over some little scene and drawing conclusions is exactly what being insecure means.

no it becomes a polyamorous harem instead of a polygamy harem. ntr means having your partner stolen without your knowledge. and nothing like this happened in this novel, so I don't understand what you are even trying to convey.

NP bro. I have many fanfics on my list for the past 2 years. Maybe you will find one you will like.

Even though I have built my tolerance over 5 years of my reading journey, I still can't get past 8 chapters of this BS. One piece is my fav anime and I was happy thinking I will read a fanfic with high ratings but ig we can't believe the ratings on this app.

"IF* it happens then it's ntr, but just cuz some girl worship fmc fanatically people here start calling it ntr and it is called being insecure.

Well everyone's opinion is different but for me Arise is way better than any of its predecessors.

Have you read the new Ultimate one where he is already married to MJ and gets his power after his marriage? Is it good ? I heard people saying it's good.

Yeah I understand, that's why I wanted to show some positive criticism so that you can improve on what I think can be done differently. I mostly don't comment much about criticism as I leave the fanfic which I don't like. But your fanfic is honestly one of the best I read here. And that's why I gave my opinion so that you can improve as you keep on writing. It's been a long time since I read about a mc who isn't a murder hobo or a kind and forgiving good guy (honestly I am also tired of forgiving mc after just finishing Trails of Cold Steel 3). Also one of the reasons why I like your fanfic is cuz you added Rin and like myself you also seems to be a great Fate series and Rin admirer. So cheers to that too and just keep on pumping those chapters.

So she didn't summoned 'Actually Satan' yet ?

No need to be sorry bro. Everyone has different opinion, like I also don't like Obito and how everyone treats him like some broken hero while to me he just seemed like the biggest simp.

He never get to be a dad though. When Naruto was born he died, when he was bring back with reanimated jutsu there was whole war going on so he had no time to be a dad at that time too. When he get the time to talk to him after the war the jutsu was released so he had not much time at that time too.