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Superanonymous1yrReplied to the_reaverI am writing the outline right now and then once I am done I am going to go back to releasing. I just needed to write my plans down so I can reduce any possible plot holes before I got too far in. I will say that I plan on releasing two or three chapters at once when I come back
Ch 26 The Arrival- Superanonymous1yrReplied to the_reaver
Not Quite, But I can't spoil more then that sadly
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Hey man, thank you for the tips this is my first time writing and I appreciate the notes. I think I need to fix the synopsis to make what you can expect from the story clearer. I also appreciate the grammar notes and I will go back and rework those chapters to fix the grammar. I hope you have a good day.
- Superanonymous1yrReplied to TheprimordialGod
Hmm, for merging stuff into his race, I was going to go in a bit of a different direction from that but he will do something sorta similar as merging things into himself once he gets further into the story. Although there will be more ritual shenanigans later on as well
Ch 8 The Plans of a Royal - Superanonymous1yrReplied to TheprimordialGod
- Superanonymous1yrReplied to Kibbinz
Likely more since this is a book that seems like it’ll be about the MC moving between hundreds of worlds
[A sword made by a talented blacksmith to embody the traits of its wielder. It is bestial and ferocious but carries its own brand of elegance. This sword was made for the sole purpose of devouring its enemies. During its creation, it birthed the special effect, [Amplification] to aid its owner.] - Superanonymous1yrCommented
I’m assuming that if evolution works like other monster novels then he will probably regain the arm when he evolves
Next, he tried to test his regeneration. He went to cut his arm, only to realize that his arm was no longer there. His face turned grim. - Superanonymous1yrCommented
I’m gonna be sad if bret ever dies because I love his and Blake’s bromance
"Right away." Bret really wanted to kill this woman. He wanted to disable her limbs and unhinge her jaw before tossing her to the goblins. Blake was his brother in arms. They were best friends. He paused as he took a look at Blake on the bed and suddenly felt anger well up from inside him and kicked the woman on the floor before picking her up by her foot and dragging her out of the room. - Superanonymous1yrCommented
Do the dragons have fated ones too?
The drake looked at the young girl with a bit of fear in its eyes. It quickly dropped the shirt and ran off. The young girl tilted her head to the side as she watched the drake run off and pursed her lips. "Am I that scary?" The young girl frowned as she hopped down from the rock she was on and walked over to the shirt that the drake left behind. She looked it over and took in its scent. "Hmmm…? Interesting….. Hehe…." With a soft giggle, she put the shirt on that went down to her knees with a big smile on her face. Once she looked herself over a few times and made sure her tail was not caught in anything she sniffed the air before skipping off in a certain direction. - Superanonymous1yrReplied to Sinful_Cyanide
Id argue when that secret has almost killed you, its better for someone who is extremely loyal to know
"Mistress… As far as anyone is concerned, you are already a matured young lady, especially since it is obvious you have these urges now. Besides… I know that Mistress has lived longer than your body's age." - Superanonymous1yrCommented
Theres a manga where a healer uses this idea to gain inhuman strength, definitely one of the more unique healing magic ideas ive seen
You have no idea how great it is to not need to worry about waking up to muscle cramps and aches after a workout session anymore! That also means I don't even need recovery days anymore! Do you see how broken this can be? - Superanonymous1yrCommented
Didn’t she know about him though? I thought that’s what she meant when asking about her ‘senpai’?
"Sorrow is my little sister, she is also a Demon King although I am aware of her existence she isn't aware of mine, but I'm sure you will become powerful in time." - Superanonymous1yrCommented
All I can think of is cantrips from dnd when it says level 0
A level 0 spell needed around 24 hours to stabilize in the magic sea. - Superanonymous1yrReplied to OrIgIn
Now im imagining him after the story ends just hearing about some bad guy and shooting an arrow in the sky before it kills the poor villain before he even knew what happened
'Well, maybe this is a sign that I should just level up these Quirks as much as possible before the Pure Silver Rank?' Leo thought as he analyzed how many Exp points he might need. - Superanonymous1yrReplied to Liradel
Especially since he can assume shang will keep using the same technique to gain power, making more like what soran fears
"Honestly, if it were up to me, I wouldn't accept you into the academy. As you appear right now, I fear giving you power. In my perception, when you gain power, you will bring a lot of suffering to a lot of innocent people." - Superanonymous1yrCommented
Maybe kinetic energy? Since kinetic energy is what controls temperature, maybe it absorbs kinetic ’mana’ into the arm creating a vacuum where ice mana fills in?
'What kind of Affinity do I have then?' - Superanonymous1yrCommented
My guess is its an illusion
The door to his room was abruptly opened and a middle-aged man with an agitated expression ran to Lucan, "Prince Lucan, it's bad! The emperor has revoked your title as the crown prince!"