Review Detail of NecroFan in The First Reaper

This book has many glaring issues that I will talk about. 1. The author is bad at writing coherent English. The author fails to even identify the genders of his own characters and uses improper pronouns. 2. The authors characters are all named after gods. Ex: Hades, Nyx, Ect… not only is this cringy but it creates expectations that aren’t met. 3. For a kingdom that directly references necromancy it fails to live up to the name. It seems like a friendly peaceful place with no Necromancy to be found. A fourth of the populations are Liches which makes no sense as being a lich should be rare. The point is, a lich should be near the endpoint in an undeads evolution tree, yet you can just become one with seemingly no issue. 4. The main character calls himself a reaper, but the chapter we are introduced to his status (cool idea by the way) he has no necromancy or magic other than the broad term “Soul Magic.” On top of this, the mc almost always speaks aloud when there is no need to. It’s odd. The mc also uses tiger claws despite being made up of three races that use magic. A lich, wraith, and vampire. (Vampires would use their fists or a weapon made of blood rather than something like tiger claws while using blood magic and necromancy. Lichs would use necromancy and other evil magics and a wraith would use something like telekinesis or physic magics. Maybe possession too.) the mc is lack of any (exept soul magic) of the perks a race would have and gets “instinct” as its primary ability. The novel wouldn’t be that bad if the author could properly identify the gender of his own characters or properly use commas and sentaces. Like most novels, the grammer is its downfall.