Yes please

I didn’t read the original really can you please just comment what happened say that it will be a spoiler and then go down a bit then write so people like me who haven’t read the original also can see while others who read it ir don’t want to know can skip Ps: I just realized I accidentally replied to another comment while writing this by accident so 🤷‍♂️

I think you should make it weather weather fruit for dragon Because during luffy execution he was saved from lightning and I am sure he does t have a lightning fruit

I can’t wait to see how the world government will react to this

He already put the original author name and the bame of the fanfic and put the link to the original

Though it is named (navy dark admiral) instead

This is already finished you can read it on other websites if you would like

I am not telling him to not do it or anything he probably already has some advanced chapters completed all I am doing was saying how much I don’t like when they do this ( I was writing and ended up rambling mostly)

Can you please not make the straw hats stronger and give them plot armour here they aren’t even important to the story much I hate how many stories that take place years before them always make them stronger and interferes with the mc plans and the mc leaves them with the exuse that they aren’t evil or they could be useful or something like that Though this is mostly during marine fanfics because so what if they aren’t evil because of the things they did like enis lobby, the war arc and punching the celestial dragon they are encouraging more people to be pirate and fight marine which the mc is supposed to stop but instead they start simping for luffy ( just like roger even though he is said to be a good guy who just likes freedom he is the one who encouraged people to go to sea and make tens of thousand become pirates and many people beaten, killed , r@ped, etc) I just realized that I may have gotten off topic but do whatever you want your the author and my opinion won’t really matter much anyway

He has so many shiny Pokémon and will probably get even more with better potential there is no harm in him giving one to his sister beside she is a a kid it is normal to be like that

You mean jewelry bonney

Are you talking about this fanfic if so do you think you can send me a link to the original please And yes though I just dont really like tang san and his master so I prefer to read fanfic about mc joining spirit hall

It doesn’t it only said that he will embark on a road opposing the protagonist tang San. By the way can I have the link to the original since you said that someone else was the author

It could have king gene which basically means they are far larger than normal and stronger too

Or

Please telling me he won’t be a simp for tang San here

There is a system he got it on the second chapter 😑

Do you guys know of other fanfic where mc joins the spirit hall and is against tang san and his master If you can send a link please I am looking for it

1. Bellatrix 2. Fleur

I personally like the fanfic