webnovel
avatar
0
free2breathe

free2breathe

Lv1
2021-05-11 JoinedGlobal
5.8h

of reading

11

Read books

Badges

3

Moments

3
  • free2breathe
    free2breathe7mth
    Posted

    Great potential and decent world building but the MC is frankly a moron protected by plot armor to cover up he has the intelligence of a child

    altalt
    Void Evolution System
    Fantasy · Crocs_is_Dead
    detail
  • free2breathe
    free2breathe11mth
    Posted

    There is way too much filler of over explaining and rewriting scenes that already happened. Also too many characters points of view makes it disjointed. Having so many side character side stories when the MC hasnt even done anything yet is just stretching chapters out and not progressing the story. Finally the world building seemed good at the start until it became clear the world is pretty corrupt and the people running it are stupid and inept. After reading most of it and skipping like 600 chapters of filler i can say id prefer this world burning down and start over

    altalt
    Card Apprentice Daily Log
    Games · IGotStones
    detail
  • free2breathe
    free2breathe2yr
    Posted

    Initially good story that just devolves into over description filler to extend chapters.The story gets bogged down and doesn't move forward.

    altalt
    Guild Wars
    Games · Kotario
    detail