Review Detail of free2breathe in Card Apprentice Daily Log

There is way too much filler of over explaining and rewriting scenes that already happened. Also too many characters points of view makes it disjointed. Having so many side character side stories when the MC hasnt even done anything yet is just stretching chapters out and not progressing the story. Finally the world building seemed good at the start until it became clear the world is pretty corrupt and the people running it are stupid and inept. After reading most of it and skipping like 600 chapters of filler i can say id prefer this world burning down and start over