the author keeps using the word "infested" where the word "invested" should be placed. Proper English vocabulary

my niece's name is Isla, and the "s" is silent. I love the name and the spelling. She has a twin sister named Amity. They are precious 💖

The ending mortified me. The author gave up. What a WASTE OF COINS IM SO MAD! How dare you people do this! Lead us into a good story, then kill everyone off with a sh*t ending like that! I am absolutely sickened by this ending, and so are a lot of commentors at the end. Shame on you!

so many authors are giving up on their endings. I've read some really stupid ones. some were the beginning of the book started over. imagine going back to the beginning, thinking, hey! I've read this before! but it just keeps going. and the author is charging you coins for it! so infuriating! this isn't the first really bad ending, and it probably won't be the last. if their dignity is worth giving up like this they're the ones who have to live with it. In life, copping out is never going to get them anywhere.

I had my 1st son at age 35, 2nd son at age 36 and my last child, a daughter, at age 40. Who says they don't have time for children? 🤣❤️

Did the author abandon the book? Is there going to be an update? Did I pay all of that money to not get an ending?

Is this ever going to be updated again? Did the author quit? What's going on?!

quit is the plural of quit. quitted is not a word. "he quit his job a while ago." is the correct English

the word is "Drool" saliva running down your mouth, savoring something. not 'droll'.

Luna is an idiot to be so nice to the people who treat her so bad. She needs to get a backbone.

"enxiaty" is incorrect. the correct word is "anxiety"

it's not a bouquet, it's a banquet. a bouquet is flowers. 💐a banquet is a table of food and dessert along with drinks.

the correct phrasing would be: "She hasn't," not: "She haven't."

You could drive down Lombard Street in the past, but now they've closed it off to walking only. My dad would take us down in the car and it was so much fun!

If I'm going to get chapters in and they're going to come at me with the $49.99 for the book, I'm out, so just tell me now! When did they start doing that? I'm just stunned! I like the old way better! I read chapters as I can afford them, not $50 in one go! I guess I'm done with Webnovel. I'll go back to my Kindle. 🥺

arrow bag/quiver

the term is "Spoiled sport."

the meeting is adjourned, not injured.

"Placid" Jonathan? bad choice of word. "Placate" would have been a better choice.

Cheary? Cheery.