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That will shortly come. Although the field examination chapters were a bit offside from the plot, I deemed it necessary just to show the dangers lurking outside the slums. Now that the filler is done, the plot is going to return to its original place. Hv planned smn quite interesting for the concrete door part, hopefully it turns out well
He's just being sarcastic. As whining was the actual Roy's personality, he thinks it's a predominantly present attribute and says famous. Just think of it as reverse psychology.
It's the plot. 40 chapters in and I don't really see the world background or what actually the plot is about. Like for eg, the game elements. If Leon is the protagonist and if the game events have already began, then shouldn't there be something that pushes the story further, I just feel like it's overly centered on Julien and his newfound quirks.
You could say that but the story is mainly still progressing on Julien's emotive abilities, rather than the whole plot of the game he's transmigrated into. The writing is detailed and excellent but I just am not getting the connection.... If you know wtt I mean.. I'm not telling its bad, it's a bit confusing more or less
Idk I just feel it that way but isn't the story too slow at this point. The mystery patches up the slow pace but compared to TAPOV, I just feel like the ship is barely holding up. Great fan of your work but I am a bit confused about the pace, so if you can kindly do let me in on this situation.....
Well a very conceptual novel imo. It begins slowly, which is really nice and smooth. Due to the slow start the background also erupts along with the plot which is exactly how I like to write. The story development needs a bit more work. For a slow novel, one must have any other attractive features like mystery or horror Has potential.....