I may have not written this chapter well enough if you understood it like this but the thing is, the house was litteraly falling down on them : if Enji had choosen to help Touya, he and Shoto would've died with him. He choose to prioritise saving one kid and then come back but it was already too late once he crossed the thresold of the room

The paragraph you are quoting is answering your own question

Why Endeavor wouldn’t ? His son died and he went through his life thinking it was his fault. He now has a second chance - why shouldn’t he be happy ?

There is romance but not for MC

It is, yes. Also if you love violence you're gonna get enough to be fed up for years

Also, you can read the french version of this story on my profile for I am publishing too for the extremely limited amount of french readers I have. And the tone of the story is changing because, as said in the chapters’ title, we want from ‘Part 1’ to ‘Part 2’ of the story

I usually love constructive criticism yet yours is not : going on your profile I've seen you put three 1 star reviews for 3 different books (mine included) in the span of 2hours and a half. Each time you mentionned having either read few chapters (6) or not liking the 'basic setting' of a story, which is dumb because if I don't like harem for example I'm not going to go around giving bad reviews to all harem stories that cross my path. I'm giving you one full hour to read this answer before I delete your review. Try to understand what is the purpose of reviewing a story before you do so next time.

Also All Might is extremely far from dumb - I guess your hypothesis would work in wish fulfillments kind of fic, but I'm trying to make every character have his own free will and goals, thus people won't bend over and let MC do whatever he wants

'Immutability' means that the gifts he got before reincarnating are not dissociable from him ; his fire and ice fall in that category because, in some twisted way, they are either basic elements (for fire) or derived elements (ice) from chakra nature's basic elements. Immutability doesn't mean Shoto is immune to mental damages or such things : otherwise he definitely wouldn't be... well, he wouldn't be the paranoiac, sometimes crazy and often violent MC we have now

Because it is exciting : and Shoto hasn't stopped his mind on anything yet

That’s funnier to write

And concerning why Touya came burnt, there is an explanation to that that we'll see later : tho you can still pat yourself on the back for noticing it as very few did

Hi, first thank you for your comment. I have written this chapter around one year ago : hopefully I have improved since then and fight scenes aren't as confusing now as they used to be. Anyway thank you for your comment (and I do know this Youtuber) and the time you took to write it : I'll keep in mind the need of more clarity when writing fight scenes. Don't hesitate to tell me if there are other things that bother you in the future.

There's no good nor bad guy, I'm merely trying to portray someone used as a lab experiment by humans and yet who has been saved by them and who scare them because of what he could possibly do to them if he put his mind to it

Usually readers are happy the longer it is (and I have plenty of things to tell)

Shoto is strong asf, I need to boost everyone otherwise he will just breeze through everything and everyone and there is absolutely nothing as boring as a character who has no obstacles on his road. Thanks for your review anyway, and I suggest you keep on reading, I’m sure you’ll love the next arc.

I would say either chapter 135 or 137 - definitely after the Nagano one

Note : I allow myself the right to delete fake reviews from fake accounts as well as hateful comments for the sake of hate. I welcome every bit of constructive criticism, be it positive or negative, no matter the rating.

There are 140 chapters + on scribblehub, royal road, ao3, fanfic.net, spacebattle and sufficient velocity - go read there (and leave me a review when you finish)

Thanks very much for you comment ! And no definitely not, I am hell bent on telling it until the end