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And this guy bends time to accelerate.
Tensura fic when then?
This puts a smile on my face.
The only problem i have with the story is the MC's personality. He seems so stupid sometimes that it's frustrating. He doesn't seem to take anything seriously, his fighting style just makes me wonder if this book is supposed to be comedy or something, he's constantly employing tactics such as throwing lime juice in people's eyes, putting laxatives in their food before they fight and ball kicking/eye pocking.I'm aware this is a translation, btw.
He's afraid to leave the house when the system is down, even tho he's level 3? This MC is pathetic.
This makes no sense. He says she "shouldn't exist" as if she couldn't just be some random person that never appeared in the series. Makes him feel arrogant.
A protagonist can only be as smart as the author, so its pretty obvious the author isnt very smart.
The story seemed good at first, then the dragon God trials hapenned, and MC became braindead, author started using the ancestral goddess' "fate manipulation" to force the plot and so it ended up not changing much, yuechan still became crippled by "sacrificing" herself to help the MC. Even when the MC had a foolproof plan, "fate" still found a way to make it not work and apparently also made the MC do a 180 and became retarded.
Absolutely no explanation as to why he can't but ok. Forced
The synopsis made me believe this was the book I was looking for... it wasn't. Despite having a seemingly infinite amount of wishes, the Mc chooses things that seem good at first, but end up not really being taken into account during he's innital growth(up until chapter 23). He chose something that made him level up faster and get more stats per level then normal, yet we are reminded every 2 chapters that he is weaker then his sister(1 year older then MC) and has a vastly similar growth rate as her. Now that in itself wouldn't be that big of a deal when you've read the auxiliary chapter and realise he at least gets strong at some point, but what really made me give up on the story is the fact that the author either on purpose or not, tries to make the mcs incredibly submissive behavior a "running gag". Someone who's mental age should be around 30, is getting scared and blackmailed by a 14 year old (spoiled) girl. At one point the Mc even tries to make us believe that if he's getting a leash put on him, "at least it's by my sister". Even ignoring the people constantly saying "beta Mc" and whatnot, its still true. The Mc even spills everything, from his reincarnation to his EVERY skill just because his sister told him to. Seemed like a good story, too bad I won't be continuing it. 2/10