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it seems very cool, the MC's powers are very interesting and the relationships it has so far(chp 40) are enjoyable in my opinion. One weak point I found is world-building and the fact that the protagonist's magical spells and powers aren't really explained. I think the story has great potential, even if it's harem. keep up the good work!!
the fuck does this mean?
i think it would sound better to just say "but others"
The story is amazing and extremely unique, with a lot of the things I like: - evil mc - no harem - ice user - op mc - well thought out power system the only downside is that the author has no editor, so there are some little grammatical error here and there, but I still gave 4 stars in writing quality because the syntax is pretty good and no words are repeated over and over.
he's not wrong, this is just too cliche, i can tell you how's gonna end.
he was probably bullied as a kid
Italian tv conductor Antonella Clerici