Review Detail of SmellyCow in Devouring Monarch: Rebirth of the Profane Phoenix
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it seems very cool, the MC's powers are very interesting and the relationships it has so far(chp 40) are enjoyable in my opinion. One weak point I found is world-building and the fact that the protagonist's magical spells and powers aren't really explained. I think the story has great potential, even if it's harem. keep up the good work!!
Devouring Monarch: Rebirth of the Profane Phoenix
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Thanks for the review; I built the novel's world as it progressed purposely, but maybe I could have gone deeper earlier. But rather than huge info dumps, I believe by chapter 100, it will be a completely fresh feeling and the most up-to-date solidifies the universe even more, with various stories, lore, history, and events coming together. I tried to focus on what the MC would focus on in the first 60 chapters. He never really cared for anything in his past life, so the information grows as he learns more about the world and his past!