prideful, if you will

...why? is 2 the limit? seems needlessly arbitrary

woooohooooo based aldebaran POV lets gooooooooo

i honestly cannot believe that you have ignored the side characters' POVs for a whole 2 chapters in a row. this is unacceptable and I expect by the next chapter we get another aldebaran POV or I will further cosider promptly dropping this novel

im like 90% sure that baldur is an OC himself though? lol

hmm, it's hard to say. there's definitely only 1 MC. but, there are also parts where the story is told from other characters for a bit. like there is no character that gets even remotely the same amount of screentime as baldur. i think the original reviewer is more so complaining about the existence of other OCs. they dont really take over the show. or, at least not yet (though it probably will never happen)

Based Badlur POV returns. why do we have any of the other supporting cast when Baldur alone can drive the story single-handedly so well?

Kekw. This review is hardly legible, but I think your mains points are that the MC's relationship with his mom is weird and you don't like the OCs. The mom thing is seemingly self-explanatory but you clearly can't comprehend that Baldur =/= Balder. Of course their relationship is weird he isn't her son. And yes, she *does* realize that he's very different than normal but I mean what is she supposed to do about it? She also sends him to school so he can start to make a life for himself in advance before she heals him with the dhampir serum and so on. I think you're entirely in the wrong for this point and aren't actually reading the story. As for the OCs, that's a different matter and I can see what you mean. The intent of them is to provide a different view of Azum and a different perspective into the whole situation that Baldur is in. Baldur kinda took it too in-stride and has infinite resources to work with from the get-go. Plus, he's too utilitarian and frankly pretty boring as a protagonist. The other OC POV, Aldebaran, is a pretty interesting take on the scenario since he has 0 combat power and none of the resources Baldur has. Other than Alley, none of the others really get in the way so I don't see the issue tbh. Anyways TL;DR is that you're wrong and cringe

I am very disappointed to see yet another chapter not including Baldur as the POV. He is the most interesting and well-written character in the wn and i cant believe that you keep forsaking him for the sake of your hoard of OCs. I am considering dropping this wn promptly.

For some reason this chapter is intentionally confusing but that's life. To those coming off of it confused af, I wouldn't worry about it; author plans on making it more clear in time

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All right, here's a more serious review. Honestly, don't expect a lot of Marvel content here. This is about 80% OC and 20% Marvel; it's using the setting of the Marvel universe to create a unique story with its own characters. Of course Marvel characters pop up and so on but so far none of them are predominant. The writing is good enough, not perfect but you know. Give it a shot and see if you like it despite the plethora of different POVs.

wait, why of all characters nixie? lmao. i dont really see how it's a plot twist or a deus ex machina whatsoever, either. like seriously please respond and tell me what you think is a plot twist here. i can respect not liking aldebaran as a character i suppose, although i disagree. like how is *he* the deus ex machina when you yourself admit that baldur is power fantasy incarnate? if anything aldebaran takes the perspective of baldur w/o the powers; they were both mages on azum but one is recovering well and the other isnt.