Review Detail of NewAccount in Magus in Marvel

All right, here's a more serious review. Honestly, don't expect a lot of Marvel content here. This is about 80% OC and 20% Marvel; it's using the setting of the Marvel universe to create a unique story with its own characters. Of course Marvel characters pop up and so on but so far none of them are predominant. The writing is good enough, not perfect but you know. Give it a shot and see if you like it despite the plethora of different POVs.